Nakanishi + A magic touch
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snoozing_kittenTitle: A Magic Touch
Pairing: Akanishi Jin x Nakamaru Yuichi
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Kink, Toys
Summary: Jin and Maru play with one of his birthday gifts.
Maru’s sneakers skidded along the floor as he slipped along the floor, his robes tangled about his feet threatening to trip him, but he had danced semi-complicated routines with worse on. Still, Maru glanced over his shoulder at the empty corridor, before ducking into the stairwell and dashing down the fight of stairs. He hoped to make it down in time to hide in one of the dressing rooms before his pursuer caught up.
“I can feel you there!” Maru let out a shriek and threw open the door sprinting down the hallway. Picking the third left door he slipped inside and shut it quietly behind him. Ueda looked up from painting his nails.
“Maru?”
“Shhh… Will you hide me?” He moved across the room, ducking down, so he could crouch behind the purple couch where Ueda was working with the black paint, sitting cross-legged.
“Will you tell me why you’re dressed like Harry Potter?”
“Yeah, oh here he comes hide me!” Maru couched lower, with a roll of his eyes Ueda glanced up when someone else entered the room. Dressed also in long black robes and thick black-rimmed glasses perched on his nose, highlighting flushed cheeks. Ueda had a few thoughts on the sanity of his band mates, but biting his lips against them and he simply stared at the other man.
“You there- muggle. Have you seen Maru-Potter?”
“Have I what?” Ueda calmly painted a pink stripe on his right pinky.
“I am looking for Maru-Potter so I can have my wicked way with him.” Ueda’s plush mouth rounded out in an ‘O’ of understanding. “I must exact my revenge on him.”
“I see. And who are you?” Jin puffed out his chest and thumping it with his hand in a show of –manicured- blatant macho-ism.
“I am he-who-shall-not-be-named Lord Jin…-dermort.”
“Oh.” Jin huffed putting his hands on his hips and giving Ueda an evil glare.
“Now have you seen him or not?” Ueda shook his head, and offered a sad smile.
“Nope.” Jin threw up his arms with a cry.
“I kill you now! BANG BANG!” He waved his wand at the other man and rushed out the door in a billow of black cloth. It slammed behind him.
“Gone?” Maru peeked out from behind the couch; he looked all over the room before standing up fully. The younger man rolled his eyes and focused on his middle finger, painting it white.
“You two are really messed up- you know that right?”
“Mmm.” He nodded his agreement. “But the sex is great.” Carefully –with his unpainted hand- he threw a pillow at Maru, with the older man dodging to the side with a gleeful smile. He ducked out the doorway whence he came.
“Idiots.” Ueda muttered to himself in the still room, outside he could hear a muffled screech and the steady sound of sneakers skidding across the over-waxed floor. “Really.”
Jin was faster, but Maru was a tricky little guy. He was frustrated with being unable to catch the little mouse when he a door creaked behind him, and he found himself face to face with a surprised Maru. A small pause where neither of them moved, caught in the deer-in-headlights mentality. There was a brief scuffle, and Jin’s glasses were knocked askew, and he may or maynot have been groped. Which is okay, because he got a handful of the other’s perky ass as they tumbled into the dance studio that Maru had been hiding in.
Jin locked the door from the inside.
It was one of those mirrored walls –he was beginning to think that Maru might have engineered his own capture- for dance practice. He licked his lips and fluffed out his robes, drawing to his full height to be more intimidating.
“I caught you.” Maru leered –decidedly not frightened- at him.
“Mmm.” Maru nodded his agreement, blatantly ogling at Jin’s tight jeans shown through the slit in his robes. “So what are you going to do about it?”
“I’m going to use my wand on you.” Jin pulled it out of his robes again, and allowed Maru to take a closer look at it. The box had said in mock-goth lightening-strike letters ‘Bewitch your lover!’ and promised hours of naughty fun. Complete with pictures of some girl in a witch hat and nothing more on a broomstick, grinning hugely at a wizard who (in Jin’s favourite words ‘may or maynot’ have) looked like Harry Potter.
“But I am defenseless!” Jin rolled his eyes.
“So?” Pointing the wand at him, he pointed to the jeans and shouted something that sounded suspiciously like ‘Stripith Clothe-us’. Not one to mess with the guy with the wand, Maru happily toed his sneakers off, peeled his jeans off, wiggled out of his robes, and pulled his shirt over his head. Standing in his boxers only he hooked his thumbs under the waist and tugged it down only far enough to show the barest peek of his pubic hair.
“These too?”
“All of it.” Jin watched him, grinning and peering through his glasses as Maru quickly stripped off the last of his clothing, adding it to the pile on the floor. “Okay. Go, get one of the mats, and bring it here. Or I’ll zap you dead.”
“Ohhhh… scary!” Maru snorted, even as he set about doing as Jin instructed. The mats were usually used for when there was flipping to be coordinated, the entire floor would transform into a softer, less bone breaking surface. When they weren’t used they were usually stacked neatly in the corner, where Maru pulled one down and dragged it to the middle of the room.
“You’re such a good underling Maru-Potter.” He almost choked when Jin called him that; it was just bordering on the absurd. “Are you going to convert to the dark side?”
“What will you do if I don’t?” He all but purred at the younger man, trying to look innocent by batting his eyelashes.
“You’ll be punished.”
“I’ll never join you!” Maru giggled softly, and Jin shook his head- he was such a bad actor sometimes, usually when his dick was involved.
“Fine.” He huffed, pointing his wand in a rather menacing fashion. “Hands and knees!” Maru simply blinked at him, and so blowing his bangs out of his face with an annoyed huff. “Now bitch.”
“Geez.” Maru sighed as he lowered himself down on the mat.
“You shall call me ‘My Lord’!” Jin snapped. Maru bit his lips to keep the giggle from spilling forth. Jin’s hands were slightly clammy as he slid them down Maru’s back to rest on his hips. He leaned over Maru’s back plastering himself along the older man’s back. “I love you.” He whispered against his neck, nibbling on the alabaster skin.
“Yeah, I love you too.” Maru arched back up against him, turning his neck and trying to catch a kiss. Instead he got a pinch on his hip and a low growl. “My lord.”
“Very good.” He shifted his grip on the smaller man pushing him back down into the mattress so he chest was pressed to the ground but his hips were canted up in the air, pinned like that with one of Jin’s hands on his shoulders. “I’ll win yet.” He whispered against the other’s back, pressing light kisses against his hips, ass and lower back.
The pocket of his jeans forfeited a travel sized tube of lubricated jelly, with a wicked smirk he stored his wand away in his robes again and warned Maru not to move or Jin would just have to spank him into submission. He wiggled a bit but stilled a soon as one of Jin’s fingers were smoothing down his flank. The tip of one of his fingers worming down his crack to tease against the puckered hole there.
“Ahh…” Maru moaned against his arm pillowed under his face, trying to cant his hips up higher. Shallow movements, meant more to tease then to really prepare; there was a bit of sadistic fun to be had with the frustrated noises that Maru made, whining for more contact. Besides he’d made it far to hard to catch him, so Jin was about ready to exact his evil revenge. “Jiiiin.” Maru wiggled under his grip.
With both his hands busy he bit into the taught muscle of his left cheek and Maru squealed.
“My Lord.” Jin reminded him with a smirk.
“Jerk.” Jin slipped his index finger free, and applied more of the jelly to his two fingers, and slipped them in one steady burn into the smaller man. Pushing himself up a high onto his knees as he could, inviting the fingers deeper and deeper into his body. The stretch was almost right, but not deep enough, not hard enough and he shifted on his knees, trying to get any leverage he could in the awkward position.
And then it was all gone.
“Here, move.” Jin’s slippery hands were pulling on his left hip, and he rose up on shaky arms. They moved and shifted until Maru was face first in Jin’s lap, and the other’s jeans had added to the pile of discarded clothing.
He was half expecting the first press of the slick wand against his body, but that didn’t mean he didn’t almost choke on Jin’s cock. Slipping it just free of his lips, he rested his forehead against the crease of the other man’s thigh, feeling the slip slide of Jin’s wand as it wormed its way up into his body.
“Ah. Oh fuck.” Maru hissed, he swore that he could feel the ridge detail of the fake wood. Jin kept the pressure constant all the way inside, until it came to the groove at the base where it fit snug against his opening. Jin’s hands on his shoulders made him shift and it moved inside him lighting up his nerves with sensation that made him shudder and moan.
“You like that?” Jin sounded smug- bastard, just wait till it was shoved up his ass and see if he was so smug then. “How about this?” Jin’s fingers twisted the end and it vibrated to life.
Maru swore he saw stars.
He couldn’t help but giggle, Maru was moaning and panting, thrusting his hips in tiny jerk movements against nothing. The older man seemed to be enjoying himself. Jin ran his fingers through sweaty hair, and coaxed Maru’s mouth back to where he was so hard he thought that it might snap off.
He was having a hard time, the pulsing sensation that rocked his whole body moving from inside outward like ripples in a pond, each one doubling back and rocking him with what felt like increasing force. With all the sensation it was getting progressively harder not to choke on Jin’s dick- that was not his preferred way to die, not even close. He licked at it, not even trying to take it deeper, just trying to keep breathing, and keep Jin’s hands from tugging all his hair out.
“Touch yourself.” Jin hissed, watching the smaller man writhing on the ground between his spread thighs. He shifted his weight to hold himself up on one arm, the other snaking under his body to wrap around his weeping penis. “Wait, sit up on your knees.”
He groaned loudly, shaking his head, the ends of his hair brushing the insides of Jin’s thighs.
“Yes.” Jin shifted his grip on his hair, and used the other in a wrap around his shoulder to tug him up. He shuddered, leaning against Jin’s arm to stop the swaying; the insides of his eyelids were exploding in tencho-colour fireworks. The wand shifted and vibrated against his insides, causing him to shake with the overwhelming sensation. If he didn’t stop it soon he was going to vibrate right apart! With little gory bits sticking to the floor, the mirrors and dripping from Jin’s ridiculously flipped-out hair.
“Please.” Jin was pressed up against him, rough robes against his skin and the sensation almost made him cry.
“Go ahead.” He began to tug at his erection, egging on the orgasm that was pooling in his gut, rushing down his spine each notch of his backbone bursting much like a string of fire crackers. He was going to explode. It hit him like lightening, electrifying his whole body, and he could feel every single nerve firing, sending his brain into one mass seizure as he it flowed through him and out, again and again in seemly endless waves.
“Oh my god.” Maru slumped still feeling it still pulsing in his ass, the sensation painful on his fucked-out body. He moaned long and low as he tugged it free, letting it fall with a –thunk- against the floor. “I’m going to kill you.” He groaned against Jin’s strong chest.
“That intense?” He smirked down at his older lover.
“I thought I died.” He confessed, Jin only cackled.
“Wanna fuck?” Jin wiggled his eyebrows and Maru shot him a dirty look.
“At least an hour.” Maru hissed at him, shoving at his chest until Jin complied and slipped onto his back on the mat. He sunk down between his legs again, taking the dusky-rose coloured head in his mouth and suckling hard.
“Oh hell yeah.” He tangled his fingers in the chocolate brown hair, grown out to be the perfect length to use as a sort of handle. Bracing his feet, he pushed his hips up, and Maru rode the movement, deceptively small hands shoving the younger man back down. Jin twisted in his grip, moaning helplessly as Maru teased him with a quick and agile tongue.
Maru hummed low in his throat –control of all the muscles there, it’s like beatboxing but… not- and Jin shrieked. He tugged at the silky strands and arched up, coming hard in thick bursts of salty-bitter flavour. The shudders traveled along his limbs leaving them twitching softly in the aftershocks as he melted into a puddle of boneless Jin.
Maru curled against his leg and lay his head against the soft skin there, tracing fingers along the thin skin.
“Well that was fun.” Jin sighed, and Maru giggled.
“Can I use it on you when we get home?” He traced a small heart on and then licked across it.
“Of course!” Jin tugged the smaller man up the length of his body so they could kiss languid and slow.
Kame had meant it more of a gag gift –he should have known better.
Pairing: Akanishi Jin x Nakamaru Yuichi
Rating: NC-17
Warnings: Kink, Toys
Summary: Jin and Maru play with one of his birthday gifts.
Maru’s sneakers skidded along the floor as he slipped along the floor, his robes tangled about his feet threatening to trip him, but he had danced semi-complicated routines with worse on. Still, Maru glanced over his shoulder at the empty corridor, before ducking into the stairwell and dashing down the fight of stairs. He hoped to make it down in time to hide in one of the dressing rooms before his pursuer caught up.
“I can feel you there!” Maru let out a shriek and threw open the door sprinting down the hallway. Picking the third left door he slipped inside and shut it quietly behind him. Ueda looked up from painting his nails.
“Maru?”
“Shhh… Will you hide me?” He moved across the room, ducking down, so he could crouch behind the purple couch where Ueda was working with the black paint, sitting cross-legged.
“Will you tell me why you’re dressed like Harry Potter?”
“Yeah, oh here he comes hide me!” Maru couched lower, with a roll of his eyes Ueda glanced up when someone else entered the room. Dressed also in long black robes and thick black-rimmed glasses perched on his nose, highlighting flushed cheeks. Ueda had a few thoughts on the sanity of his band mates, but biting his lips against them and he simply stared at the other man.
“You there- muggle. Have you seen Maru-Potter?”
“Have I what?” Ueda calmly painted a pink stripe on his right pinky.
“I am looking for Maru-Potter so I can have my wicked way with him.” Ueda’s plush mouth rounded out in an ‘O’ of understanding. “I must exact my revenge on him.”
“I see. And who are you?” Jin puffed out his chest and thumping it with his hand in a show of –manicured- blatant macho-ism.
“I am he-who-shall-not-be-named Lord Jin…-dermort.”
“Oh.” Jin huffed putting his hands on his hips and giving Ueda an evil glare.
“Now have you seen him or not?” Ueda shook his head, and offered a sad smile.
“Nope.” Jin threw up his arms with a cry.
“I kill you now! BANG BANG!” He waved his wand at the other man and rushed out the door in a billow of black cloth. It slammed behind him.
“Gone?” Maru peeked out from behind the couch; he looked all over the room before standing up fully. The younger man rolled his eyes and focused on his middle finger, painting it white.
“You two are really messed up- you know that right?”
“Mmm.” He nodded his agreement. “But the sex is great.” Carefully –with his unpainted hand- he threw a pillow at Maru, with the older man dodging to the side with a gleeful smile. He ducked out the doorway whence he came.
“Idiots.” Ueda muttered to himself in the still room, outside he could hear a muffled screech and the steady sound of sneakers skidding across the over-waxed floor. “Really.”
Jin was faster, but Maru was a tricky little guy. He was frustrated with being unable to catch the little mouse when he a door creaked behind him, and he found himself face to face with a surprised Maru. A small pause where neither of them moved, caught in the deer-in-headlights mentality. There was a brief scuffle, and Jin’s glasses were knocked askew, and he may or maynot have been groped. Which is okay, because he got a handful of the other’s perky ass as they tumbled into the dance studio that Maru had been hiding in.
Jin locked the door from the inside.
It was one of those mirrored walls –he was beginning to think that Maru might have engineered his own capture- for dance practice. He licked his lips and fluffed out his robes, drawing to his full height to be more intimidating.
“I caught you.” Maru leered –decidedly not frightened- at him.
“Mmm.” Maru nodded his agreement, blatantly ogling at Jin’s tight jeans shown through the slit in his robes. “So what are you going to do about it?”
“I’m going to use my wand on you.” Jin pulled it out of his robes again, and allowed Maru to take a closer look at it. The box had said in mock-goth lightening-strike letters ‘Bewitch your lover!’ and promised hours of naughty fun. Complete with pictures of some girl in a witch hat and nothing more on a broomstick, grinning hugely at a wizard who (in Jin’s favourite words ‘may or maynot’ have) looked like Harry Potter.
“But I am defenseless!” Jin rolled his eyes.
“So?” Pointing the wand at him, he pointed to the jeans and shouted something that sounded suspiciously like ‘Stripith Clothe-us’. Not one to mess with the guy with the wand, Maru happily toed his sneakers off, peeled his jeans off, wiggled out of his robes, and pulled his shirt over his head. Standing in his boxers only he hooked his thumbs under the waist and tugged it down only far enough to show the barest peek of his pubic hair.
“These too?”
“All of it.” Jin watched him, grinning and peering through his glasses as Maru quickly stripped off the last of his clothing, adding it to the pile on the floor. “Okay. Go, get one of the mats, and bring it here. Or I’ll zap you dead.”
“Ohhhh… scary!” Maru snorted, even as he set about doing as Jin instructed. The mats were usually used for when there was flipping to be coordinated, the entire floor would transform into a softer, less bone breaking surface. When they weren’t used they were usually stacked neatly in the corner, where Maru pulled one down and dragged it to the middle of the room.
“You’re such a good underling Maru-Potter.” He almost choked when Jin called him that; it was just bordering on the absurd. “Are you going to convert to the dark side?”
“What will you do if I don’t?” He all but purred at the younger man, trying to look innocent by batting his eyelashes.
“You’ll be punished.”
“I’ll never join you!” Maru giggled softly, and Jin shook his head- he was such a bad actor sometimes, usually when his dick was involved.
“Fine.” He huffed, pointing his wand in a rather menacing fashion. “Hands and knees!” Maru simply blinked at him, and so blowing his bangs out of his face with an annoyed huff. “Now bitch.”
“Geez.” Maru sighed as he lowered himself down on the mat.
“You shall call me ‘My Lord’!” Jin snapped. Maru bit his lips to keep the giggle from spilling forth. Jin’s hands were slightly clammy as he slid them down Maru’s back to rest on his hips. He leaned over Maru’s back plastering himself along the older man’s back. “I love you.” He whispered against his neck, nibbling on the alabaster skin.
“Yeah, I love you too.” Maru arched back up against him, turning his neck and trying to catch a kiss. Instead he got a pinch on his hip and a low growl. “My lord.”
“Very good.” He shifted his grip on the smaller man pushing him back down into the mattress so he chest was pressed to the ground but his hips were canted up in the air, pinned like that with one of Jin’s hands on his shoulders. “I’ll win yet.” He whispered against the other’s back, pressing light kisses against his hips, ass and lower back.
The pocket of his jeans forfeited a travel sized tube of lubricated jelly, with a wicked smirk he stored his wand away in his robes again and warned Maru not to move or Jin would just have to spank him into submission. He wiggled a bit but stilled a soon as one of Jin’s fingers were smoothing down his flank. The tip of one of his fingers worming down his crack to tease against the puckered hole there.
“Ahh…” Maru moaned against his arm pillowed under his face, trying to cant his hips up higher. Shallow movements, meant more to tease then to really prepare; there was a bit of sadistic fun to be had with the frustrated noises that Maru made, whining for more contact. Besides he’d made it far to hard to catch him, so Jin was about ready to exact his evil revenge. “Jiiiin.” Maru wiggled under his grip.
With both his hands busy he bit into the taught muscle of his left cheek and Maru squealed.
“My Lord.” Jin reminded him with a smirk.
“Jerk.” Jin slipped his index finger free, and applied more of the jelly to his two fingers, and slipped them in one steady burn into the smaller man. Pushing himself up a high onto his knees as he could, inviting the fingers deeper and deeper into his body. The stretch was almost right, but not deep enough, not hard enough and he shifted on his knees, trying to get any leverage he could in the awkward position.
And then it was all gone.
“Here, move.” Jin’s slippery hands were pulling on his left hip, and he rose up on shaky arms. They moved and shifted until Maru was face first in Jin’s lap, and the other’s jeans had added to the pile of discarded clothing.
He was half expecting the first press of the slick wand against his body, but that didn’t mean he didn’t almost choke on Jin’s cock. Slipping it just free of his lips, he rested his forehead against the crease of the other man’s thigh, feeling the slip slide of Jin’s wand as it wormed its way up into his body.
“Ah. Oh fuck.” Maru hissed, he swore that he could feel the ridge detail of the fake wood. Jin kept the pressure constant all the way inside, until it came to the groove at the base where it fit snug against his opening. Jin’s hands on his shoulders made him shift and it moved inside him lighting up his nerves with sensation that made him shudder and moan.
“You like that?” Jin sounded smug- bastard, just wait till it was shoved up his ass and see if he was so smug then. “How about this?” Jin’s fingers twisted the end and it vibrated to life.
Maru swore he saw stars.
He couldn’t help but giggle, Maru was moaning and panting, thrusting his hips in tiny jerk movements against nothing. The older man seemed to be enjoying himself. Jin ran his fingers through sweaty hair, and coaxed Maru’s mouth back to where he was so hard he thought that it might snap off.
He was having a hard time, the pulsing sensation that rocked his whole body moving from inside outward like ripples in a pond, each one doubling back and rocking him with what felt like increasing force. With all the sensation it was getting progressively harder not to choke on Jin’s dick- that was not his preferred way to die, not even close. He licked at it, not even trying to take it deeper, just trying to keep breathing, and keep Jin’s hands from tugging all his hair out.
“Touch yourself.” Jin hissed, watching the smaller man writhing on the ground between his spread thighs. He shifted his weight to hold himself up on one arm, the other snaking under his body to wrap around his weeping penis. “Wait, sit up on your knees.”
He groaned loudly, shaking his head, the ends of his hair brushing the insides of Jin’s thighs.
“Yes.” Jin shifted his grip on his hair, and used the other in a wrap around his shoulder to tug him up. He shuddered, leaning against Jin’s arm to stop the swaying; the insides of his eyelids were exploding in tencho-colour fireworks. The wand shifted and vibrated against his insides, causing him to shake with the overwhelming sensation. If he didn’t stop it soon he was going to vibrate right apart! With little gory bits sticking to the floor, the mirrors and dripping from Jin’s ridiculously flipped-out hair.
“Please.” Jin was pressed up against him, rough robes against his skin and the sensation almost made him cry.
“Go ahead.” He began to tug at his erection, egging on the orgasm that was pooling in his gut, rushing down his spine each notch of his backbone bursting much like a string of fire crackers. He was going to explode. It hit him like lightening, electrifying his whole body, and he could feel every single nerve firing, sending his brain into one mass seizure as he it flowed through him and out, again and again in seemly endless waves.
“Oh my god.” Maru slumped still feeling it still pulsing in his ass, the sensation painful on his fucked-out body. He moaned long and low as he tugged it free, letting it fall with a –thunk- against the floor. “I’m going to kill you.” He groaned against Jin’s strong chest.
“That intense?” He smirked down at his older lover.
“I thought I died.” He confessed, Jin only cackled.
“Wanna fuck?” Jin wiggled his eyebrows and Maru shot him a dirty look.
“At least an hour.” Maru hissed at him, shoving at his chest until Jin complied and slipped onto his back on the mat. He sunk down between his legs again, taking the dusky-rose coloured head in his mouth and suckling hard.
“Oh hell yeah.” He tangled his fingers in the chocolate brown hair, grown out to be the perfect length to use as a sort of handle. Bracing his feet, he pushed his hips up, and Maru rode the movement, deceptively small hands shoving the younger man back down. Jin twisted in his grip, moaning helplessly as Maru teased him with a quick and agile tongue.
Maru hummed low in his throat –control of all the muscles there, it’s like beatboxing but… not- and Jin shrieked. He tugged at the silky strands and arched up, coming hard in thick bursts of salty-bitter flavour. The shudders traveled along his limbs leaving them twitching softly in the aftershocks as he melted into a puddle of boneless Jin.
Maru curled against his leg and lay his head against the soft skin there, tracing fingers along the thin skin.
“Well that was fun.” Jin sighed, and Maru giggled.
“Can I use it on you when we get home?” He traced a small heart on and then licked across it.
“Of course!” Jin tugged the smaller man up the length of his body so they could kiss languid and slow.
Kame had meant it more of a gag gift –he should have known better.
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Date: 2007-07-11 07:01 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-07-11 07:32 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2007-07-11 07:38 am (UTC)I'm just cool that way I guess.
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Date: 2007-07-11 08:24 am (UTC)amajing NakaNishi ^_^_^_^_^!
i think i will laugh when i watch HPno subject
Date: 2007-07-11 08:35 am (UTC)So naughty of Jin-dermort. >//<
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Date: 2007-07-11 07:38 pm (UTC)the dialogue was a little hard to follow, but the porn was great. yay for
harry/voldemortjinru. ♥no subject
Date: 2007-07-11 10:55 pm (UTC)Uhh, I think I may have saw that pic? ^____^;
I can't ever seem to write them as a serious type couple, they just turn to crack the moment I touch the keys ; ;...
Thanks~
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Date: 2007-07-11 10:57 pm (UTC)Props to your icon 8D^_________________^ I think I may have... somewhere, wasn't someone in a beard? I forget.
Sorry~ at least the porn was good~ I was going for some aspect of read-ability.
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Date: 2007-07-11 10:58 pm (UTC)Like Harry Potter but... beatboxing. I don't think Harry can do that.
Maybe.Thanks!
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Date: 2007-07-11 10:59 pm (UTC)Thanks!!
I hope I didn't ruin it.no subject
Date: 2007-07-11 10:59 pm (UTC)Thank you!
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Date: 2007-07-12 01:28 am (UTC)i feel like such a douche. really, if i didn't like it, i wouldn't say anything. it was just a little hard to figure out who was saying what because the other person was usually doing the non-spoken action in the same paragraph. not that it matters, really, because the sex was hot. and the cosplay! i totes mem'd this and i'm making my roommate read it as soon as she gets home.
enough gushing. gomen ~♥
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Date: 2007-07-12 01:46 am (UTC)Aha... I didn't mean to sound annoyed that you... said something like that! Don't worry~ I know that I can get a little carried away because I detest the whole 'he said, she said, he said' thing and sometimes forget people can't just read my mind and know what's happening like I do ^__^; I thought you were just trying to help by pointing out what needs improvement, which is fine and dandy~ encouraged actually.
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Date: 2007-07-12 01:52 am (UTC)kame wears those glasses (well not THOSE specifically but similar) right before his solo 'seishun amigo' perf in dream boys, and it's probably the best part of the whole thing.
you didn't sound annoyed at all. i'm just a hypocrite because i loathe public concrit and here i am doing it. lol it's all good. if you want you can add me to messenger (aim/yim are both this name) and we can go into more detail. or not, it's up to you. :)
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Date: 2007-07-12 01:54 am (UTC)... I just think the Ratcliff kid is pretty hot D= not enough to sit through the whole new movie tho...
That would just be weird XD
Glad I could help in the crack!smut world, I'm generally not a very serious person, as a result most my fics are light-hearted and happy, this tho; is just a little weird =D But I don't mind.
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Date: 2007-07-12 01:59 am (UTC)I alway thought Ron was pretty cool, Jin/Hermione is just plain amusing, because he would want to be the one in panties- he always is.
Never saw dream boys ; ;Aha, I have neither aim, nor yim, sadly. ),= for I'm always on the hunt for new people. I need to know all the faults in my writing if I am ever going to get better no?
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Date: 2007-07-12 04:06 am (UTC)crystallekil [at] livejournal [dot] com. always glad to help. :)
i can also hook you up with dream boys. you know, if you're interested in watching.no subject
Date: 2007-07-12 09:52 am (UTC)probably made it betterno subject
Date: 2007-07-12 11:17 pm (UTC)They have LJ e-mails. Neat-o~
You know, that would be pretty cool, and we can make it like all back-alley-shady oh YES.no subject
Date: 2007-07-12 11:21 pm (UTC)Well the first book was kind of cute. I see that much, the series as a whole, not so muchI fell out of the whole Diru scene years ago. Back in my day I used to write a whole lot of Karou/Die.
I want to be a serious author one day, so I try to test writing on the whole scale, and sadly I'm not sure if I'll ever get good enough~ alas, I try.
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Date: 2007-07-13 01:22 am (UTC)“I am he-who-shall-not-be-named Lord Jin…-dermort.”
yay for the Bakanishi-ness!
“You two are really messed up- you know that right?” “Mmm.” He nodded his agreement. “But the sex is great.”
At least he has a reason XD!
(...Sorry if my english sucks, I'm not aware of it right now because i'm dead from my day and it's not my mother-tongue... please understand minna-san!)
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Date: 2007-07-30 09:01 am (UTC)THIS IS WHAT I COME HOME TO.
It's so shiny I want to roll around in it.
KARI ILU. \8D/
♥♥♥♥
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Date: 2008-05-17 10:55 am (UTC)I loved that you included this. Maru is sexy. :D
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Date: 2010-02-28 08:11 pm (UTC)I apologize for comment stalking your fic list(kinda making my way through it)
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Date: 2010-02-28 08:18 pm (UTC)Haha, I hadn't noticed (j/k). I havene't had the time to go through and reply to many of your comments sorry, I've been really busy, and sort of stupidly hung over these past few days. I will try and get to it when I can!
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Date: 2010-02-28 09:02 pm (UTC)that old dude huh(cause it's just the one) that Old dude is Dumbledore by the way(HP fangirl rears her ugly head)
nah it's ok, i understand a busy life, I've been procrastinating on mine(yes I am that skilled/lazy). Dude I hate you for being stupidly hungover, cause I have been sensibly sober for the past couple of days(WTF!? that needs to be fixed). Granted I don't actually get hangovers and hardly ever get drunk(high alcohol tolerance). *Hides*
Oh by the way a good way to not be hungover is to drinks lots of water whilst getting intoxicated and when you get take two aspirin and a big glass of water and some food(if it's a really bad hangover make it four aspirin and two glasses of water). It usually works.
hope you feel better.
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Date: 2010-02-28 09:31 pm (UTC)Haha, I wish I could, but you know, it never stops lolol. Haha, you should get cracking on that, the weekend is pretty much over. Yeah, I don't get hang overs either, but even my alcohol tolerance isn't enough to match a beer-bong, not on top of vodka and JD shots. Lol, it was just that kind of party (a sloppy one). Greasy food actually helps, McDs or some sort of breakfast food. Gatorade or Vitamin water is even better then usual water for it, since most of the major symptoms are a result in an osmotic imbalance, IV saline is even better xD but unless you work in a hospital that one is a little hard to acess.
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Date: 2010-02-28 10:05 pm (UTC)hahhha yes, I have perfected the art of laziness(idk why i feel so proud of that fact).
yeah I will save that for next weekend, i do have a bottle of Coconut rum in my closet, so maybe. sounds like my kind of party, yeah not a big fan of beer, but I likey JD. part of the reason it's hard for me to get drunk is cause it tends to flow right through my system and I piss it all out(makes me feel like a five year old) Considering I live in the Caribbean my drink of choice is rum(lol). Yeah this is true, but Water works cause part of the main reason you get drunk is cause your body is dehydrated, plus water helps to flush your system out(hence why you piss so much when you drink) it can also cause you to throw up(which is a good and bad thing). I generally go with water, food, aspirin and a vitamin/iron supplement(yes as a n anemic I have them lying around).
Okay is it just me that thinks that this convo makes us sound like two alcoholics(lol)
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Date: 2010-07-25 09:34 pm (UTC)And I love YOU for writing this! Never read a NakaNishi fic this funny and hot! :D