[1/1] Akanishi/Nakamaru
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snoozing_kittenTitle: I can make you beautiful.
Pairing: Jin/Nakamaru
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Jin asks a lot of Maru, but Maru is willing to rise to the occasion.
Notes: Clearly this is a tradition, I go to a Jin concert and Maru gets laid.
He desperately wanted to be able to come like this, just with fingers pressing up and --oh god-- inside and rubbing and moving and stretching him so full. The delicate edges of fingers roughened by playing the guitar and the ever so faint press of nail when they pulled all the way out and then back in. He felt hot and tight and like maybe his skin wasn’t enough to contain him, like he was going to just shed off the whole thing when it became too much. Heart thundering and his dick jerked, bobbed, he could feel the press of himself leaking wet all over his stomach and it was close. Close like a word on the tip of your tongue, but just out of reach.
Maru moaned wetly, pressing the sweaty side of his face into the pillow.
“Shhh.” Jin crooned and Maru whimpered just a little, a choked off sound that he really hoped only he could hear. But he had been at this for awhile, enough for his skin to have flushed to match his face, over-sensitized and straining into every brush of fingers. The angle was all wrong and he was feeling not so much out of his depth but a lack of depth and it was frustrating. Maru hitched his skinny hips up higher in hopes of correcting the angle and it wasn’t quite working. That time he did whine, gritting his teeth and pressing his eyes closed.
“You can do it.” Jin purred, voice rough like he had something caught in his throat, and god did Maru ever want that right now, Jin’s pretty lips around his cock, probably wouldn’t even need him to suck, just a touch and he would come apart.
“I can’t.” He groaned, it felt like he had been on the edge for hours now, teetering and almost half-wild with the urge to just come already. “Please I can’t.” Begging usually worked, hitching his ass higher and catching another embarrassing whine behind closed lips.
“You can.” Jin reassured him, and there was steel under his tone, this wasn’t a polite suggestion, this was an order and Maru was going to come just from the fingers up his ass because that was what Jin wanted. He was half-way to saying ‘fuck-it’ and jerking himself off. He couldn’t. Hated the way he needed to hear Jin growl at him ‘good job’ needed it even more then he needed to release the tension coiling too-tight in his spine.
“No no, please.” Maru licked his dry lips, the words falling without him even needed to think about it, and it didn’t help any his breath was coming fast and shallow, his blood roaring in his ears and throbbing in his temples. He was going to have a stroke and that would be the end of it, Jin really would have killed him with sex. Normally this wasn’t a problem, hands tied to the sides or gripping the head board, something usually thick and silicone vibrating against his insides like it wanted him to vibrate apart with it and his hips would jerk against the empty hair, the slick head of his cock leaving faintly wet trails against his tummy until it finally hit him like a freight train, the wind-up slower, and so much more intense for it. But this was different; this was like trying to run a marathon with his feet tied together.
Fingers pressed deeper and it wasn’t enough but the pleasure hit him like a bolt, and he moaned, pressing up and into it. Desperate for more, searching for that touch that would finally end this torture.
“Think about when I get to fuck you.” Jin rasped voice clearly as dry as Maru’s by this point. “You’ll be so open and loose. All fucked out.” Maru moaned, closed his eyes and thought hard about the deep press of Jin’s dick inside and how when they first started he swore it wasn’t going to fit and he was just going to explode. Each time since then always seemed like a slice of the end of the world.
Wanted it so bad he could almost taste it, silicone had nothing on the way Jin’s body could blanket his, press him against the bed often a little too rough and a shade too clumsy and just on the right side of perfect.
“God it always feels so good. You feel so good.” Jin moaned, and it was a surprisingly soft sound and Maru answered it with a breathless sound of his own. Closer now, just a little more. “Come on, I just need to see.”
That was it, Maru sobbed brokenly as his back curled up mouth working soundlessly because it was like being hit and being blown away and nothing like a usual orgasm. He’d been held on the edge so long it broke him, coming and coming like it would never ever stop.
His arms were shaking from the strain of holding his weight and so Maru let himself flop gracelessly on to the bed face first, arms and legs going everywhere without thought. He twisted enough so that he could still see Jin on the monitor, mouth obscenely red from where he had been chewing on his lips and face flushed so pretty. Maru’s wrist ached from being forced to bend for so long and he felt wrung out and well used. Still it would have been better with Jin here.
“I told you you could do it.” Jin growled and his breath hitched, sliding back a little so Maru could see his fingers moving over his dick, tilting the computer chair back so he could still watch Maru from under his eyelashes.
“Good job.”
Pairing: Jin/Nakamaru
Rating: NC-17
Summary: Jin asks a lot of Maru, but Maru is willing to rise to the occasion.
Notes: Clearly this is a tradition, I go to a Jin concert and Maru gets laid.
He desperately wanted to be able to come like this, just with fingers pressing up and --oh god-- inside and rubbing and moving and stretching him so full. The delicate edges of fingers roughened by playing the guitar and the ever so faint press of nail when they pulled all the way out and then back in. He felt hot and tight and like maybe his skin wasn’t enough to contain him, like he was going to just shed off the whole thing when it became too much. Heart thundering and his dick jerked, bobbed, he could feel the press of himself leaking wet all over his stomach and it was close. Close like a word on the tip of your tongue, but just out of reach.
Maru moaned wetly, pressing the sweaty side of his face into the pillow.
“Shhh.” Jin crooned and Maru whimpered just a little, a choked off sound that he really hoped only he could hear. But he had been at this for awhile, enough for his skin to have flushed to match his face, over-sensitized and straining into every brush of fingers. The angle was all wrong and he was feeling not so much out of his depth but a lack of depth and it was frustrating. Maru hitched his skinny hips up higher in hopes of correcting the angle and it wasn’t quite working. That time he did whine, gritting his teeth and pressing his eyes closed.
“You can do it.” Jin purred, voice rough like he had something caught in his throat, and god did Maru ever want that right now, Jin’s pretty lips around his cock, probably wouldn’t even need him to suck, just a touch and he would come apart.
“I can’t.” He groaned, it felt like he had been on the edge for hours now, teetering and almost half-wild with the urge to just come already. “Please I can’t.” Begging usually worked, hitching his ass higher and catching another embarrassing whine behind closed lips.
“You can.” Jin reassured him, and there was steel under his tone, this wasn’t a polite suggestion, this was an order and Maru was going to come just from the fingers up his ass because that was what Jin wanted. He was half-way to saying ‘fuck-it’ and jerking himself off. He couldn’t. Hated the way he needed to hear Jin growl at him ‘good job’ needed it even more then he needed to release the tension coiling too-tight in his spine.
“No no, please.” Maru licked his dry lips, the words falling without him even needed to think about it, and it didn’t help any his breath was coming fast and shallow, his blood roaring in his ears and throbbing in his temples. He was going to have a stroke and that would be the end of it, Jin really would have killed him with sex. Normally this wasn’t a problem, hands tied to the sides or gripping the head board, something usually thick and silicone vibrating against his insides like it wanted him to vibrate apart with it and his hips would jerk against the empty hair, the slick head of his cock leaving faintly wet trails against his tummy until it finally hit him like a freight train, the wind-up slower, and so much more intense for it. But this was different; this was like trying to run a marathon with his feet tied together.
Fingers pressed deeper and it wasn’t enough but the pleasure hit him like a bolt, and he moaned, pressing up and into it. Desperate for more, searching for that touch that would finally end this torture.
“Think about when I get to fuck you.” Jin rasped voice clearly as dry as Maru’s by this point. “You’ll be so open and loose. All fucked out.” Maru moaned, closed his eyes and thought hard about the deep press of Jin’s dick inside and how when they first started he swore it wasn’t going to fit and he was just going to explode. Each time since then always seemed like a slice of the end of the world.
Wanted it so bad he could almost taste it, silicone had nothing on the way Jin’s body could blanket his, press him against the bed often a little too rough and a shade too clumsy and just on the right side of perfect.
“God it always feels so good. You feel so good.” Jin moaned, and it was a surprisingly soft sound and Maru answered it with a breathless sound of his own. Closer now, just a little more. “Come on, I just need to see.”
That was it, Maru sobbed brokenly as his back curled up mouth working soundlessly because it was like being hit and being blown away and nothing like a usual orgasm. He’d been held on the edge so long it broke him, coming and coming like it would never ever stop.
His arms were shaking from the strain of holding his weight and so Maru let himself flop gracelessly on to the bed face first, arms and legs going everywhere without thought. He twisted enough so that he could still see Jin on the monitor, mouth obscenely red from where he had been chewing on his lips and face flushed so pretty. Maru’s wrist ached from being forced to bend for so long and he felt wrung out and well used. Still it would have been better with Jin here.
“I told you you could do it.” Jin growled and his breath hitched, sliding back a little so Maru could see his fingers moving over his dick, tilting the computer chair back so he could still watch Maru from under his eyelashes.
“Good job.”
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Date: 2010-11-22 09:52 am (UTC)thank u
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Date: 2010-11-22 11:19 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-11-22 12:43 pm (UTC)yes!
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Date: 2010-11-22 11:20 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-11-22 01:19 pm (UTC)Thanks so much; I adored this!
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Date: 2010-11-22 11:21 pm (UTC)I'm glad you enjoyed it :3
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Date: 2010-11-22 01:29 pm (UTC)and how when they first started he swore it wasn’t going to fit and he was just going to explode. Each time since then always seemed like a slice of the end of the world.
this is strangely beautiful. xD
i think we should all start a collection for you to go to jin concerts forever just for this. *nods*
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Date: 2010-11-22 11:22 pm (UTC)I blame the cold meds for all of it :D I'm glad you liked it! LOL that would be nice, flying is pricey D8 but oh so fun~
Thank you!
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Date: 2010-11-22 05:11 pm (UTC)I agree with crys, clrly you should go to jincons forever :3
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Date: 2010-11-22 11:24 pm (UTC)I'm glad you liked it 8D thank you for the comment!
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Date: 2010-11-22 06:00 pm (UTC)MARU BEING A TOTAL WHORE FOR JIN <33
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Date: 2010-11-23 01:38 am (UTC)Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!!
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Date: 2010-11-22 09:16 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-11-23 02:34 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-11-22 09:47 pm (UTC)lkdssdjsdsdk, jsdisd.
Never thought Nakanishi could be this hot.
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Date: 2010-11-23 02:36 am (UTC)Thank you! I am glad you enjoyed it!
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Date: 2010-11-22 10:29 pm (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-11-23 02:47 am (UTC)I'm glad you liked it :3 Thank you~~~!
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Date: 2010-11-23 01:53 am (UTC)so hot
thank you for sharing
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Date: 2010-11-23 02:47 am (UTC)no subject
Date: 2010-11-23 07:50 pm (UTC)Also omg he is on a monitor! This was hot and jin and maru and I loved it!
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Date: 2010-12-03 05:16 pm (UTC)Wow, I liked the story, well done~ :D Thank you.^^